Origninal post by Zack

Zack Swipe

Zack, born in he glorious but mysterious nation of Istan he never met his mother but he was raised by his father, a holy man, a monk of Dwayna and his life had been planned.He was to follow the same footsteps as his father learn the art of healing. So from a young age his training began. But deep in Zacks heart he knew he was a fighter. After several months of learning the way of the monk he has progressed a lot but healing didn’t interest him he tried using a sword, it was no use, something was missing. Zack was already a young man now and his father has been asked to aid a mighty dervish defeat some torment creatures which had said to of had spawned out of the ground.Zacks father had asked him to come to learn a lesson, so as the three men walked towards the farm all was silent. Had the creatures left? Suddenly a loud rumble came from deep below the ground when the men looked up from the ground they were surrounded, outnumbered. The dervish ran in and was struck down almost instantly Zack watched his scythe clamber on the ground, he and his father were next.Zack without thinking picked up the scythe and he had found it! What was missing when he picked up the sword the feel of the scythe handle rolled off his fingers. He turned around as he heard a cry , it was his father on the floor blood rushing out of his stomach. Zack didn’t think , he spun and twisted as he slashed and killed the demons it was a if he had known what to do his whole life. When the last demon fell he ran to his father, it was too late. From then on Zack became a dervish, he still used his monk skills but he was now one with the gods Dwayna in his heart. Balthazar in his scythe. Melandru in his speed. Lyssa in his wisdom and when he slayed a evil creature Grenth would be staring out of Zacks eyes on the creatures last breath ready to claim it. He was now to be known as Zack Swipe.  

--Last edited by zack on 2007-05-02 17:42:22 --

Holy mother of jesus fucking christ.....unbelievably brilliant.

Language Wakely....

thanks Wakely  

That was brill! luved it soo much. intresting though,first ur a monk and all of a sudden your a dervish killing lol

wow.... NIIIICE!!!!